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Instead of saying "He was scared," describe the physical signs of fear. "She was very cold."
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Don't start with "Once upon a time." Instead, drop the reader into the action or a vivid sensory moment. "The floorboards groaned as I took my first step." Instead of saying "He was scared," describe the
Do you have a specific or title (e.g., "The Secret Door")? Instead of saying "He was scared
Spend 5 minutes planning, 25 minutes writing, and 5 minutes checking for silly mistakes. To help you practice, could you tell me: Are you writing a creative story or a persuasive argument ?
"'Run!' he screamed, but it was already too late."
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